Very well planned out with good drawings and descriptions of content. The idea to time lapse the sunrise from your desk is very cool and will be an awesome opening for a day in your life. Your storyboard is very organized and I believe it will truly help you keep track while you're doing your project.
First off I really enjoy the attention to the environmental details. The natural light gleaming from the window..... that sort of thing I think sets the scene here very well. Everything here comes across as relatable and genuine and that works to the point of the film. It seems like the intimacy of this whole narrative is what is going to be it's best feature.
Hi! My name is Olivia and I'm a sophomore Publishing major at Belmont University.